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12. Insanity

Thu Jul 25, 2013, 8:32 AM
This is crazy.
It sure seems hazy.

Why do I keep doing this?
Searching for elusive bliss.

I find myself ever chasing.
From one to the other, racing.

I know what will happen after.
And it sure ain't no laughter.

I can't stand how it makes one feel.
It takes a long time for me to heal.

But for some reason I  still do it.
I know, stupid, I must admit.

I keep thinking this is the one.
After all this time, I've finally won.

So how come it never is?
And I just sit here with my frizz.

Why am I the one who always gets hurt?
And want to bury myself within the dirt?

Don't I deserve better?
What, no time for a letter?

Sometimes I think I might be messed up.
But then again who isn't?

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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Insanity is such a poetic thing...
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heronwolf Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
xD
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dreamingdays Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
It just rules our world...
Great poem ^.^
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:iconheronwolf:
heronwolf Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aptly phrased ;-)
Cheers
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like the last stanza the best.  Like seriously, who isn't messed up these days?  Great poem bud ;) 
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heronwolf Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you like it ;p
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Hotrod-31 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I can relate to this poem great work!! ^^
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:iconheronwolf:
heronwolf Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ;-)
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Hotrod-31 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
You are very much welcome!! ^-^
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