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2. Love

Sun Jun 30, 2013, 12:08 AM

Love is overrated.

Everywhere I look, girls are falling over for boys.
Boys are boasting about themselves, thinking that's what makes them appealing.
Even my best friends are tying their utmost to garner attention from some of the local lads.

I don't understand it.
What's so special about it?
Nothing.
It's just two people acting idiotic, with no regard for anything, or anyone, else.
It's crazy and stupid.


Girls get hysterical about the mere thought that something might be wrong.
Am I pretty?
Does he really love me for me?
Why is he talking to that other girl?
They think too much and it drives them insane.


Boys start fighting over the slightest provocation.
Anything that touches their ego, or goes against their idea of how things should be, and they flip.
Am I worth it?
Does she love me for me?
Why is she talking to that boy?


Love is stupid and fleeting.
It never lasts.
At a certain moment someone can't take it anymore and they bolt.

My parents didn't last.
I don't blame them.
I just wish they'd told me why.

Love is overrated.

And that's when I see him.



Adelaide

For my #100ThemesChallenge, variation 1.
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:iconcrazycrazyhorsetails:
crazycrazyhorsetails Jul 19, 2013
hmmmmm interesting......awesome wording tho
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heronwolf Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ;p
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:iconcrazycrazyhorsetails:
crazycrazyhorsetails Jul 19, 2013
welcome;)
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Cosmic--Chaos Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That isn't "love", that's attention-whoring.
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heronwolf Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
To each their own right? xD
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Amenarae Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Pfft~
Yes~
I just knew it would end that way.

Wonderful work. It was well written (though some words were missing and some letters, too.) and very interesting.
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heronwolf Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for your kind comment and fav ;-)
Yes perhaps it was a bit obvious, oh well xD
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artistic-heart13 Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's very true for a lot of people; the last part was a surprise/good ending. I like it.
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heronwolf Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ;-)
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artistic-heart13 Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome. B-)
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